How to Judge a Painter's Work
Relief, the placing of shadows, composition, and figures intent on their purpose
A red-chalk passage lists the things to weigh when judging a painter's work. First, whether the figures have the relief that the setting and its light require, and whether their shadows differ correctly between the middle of the scene, where a figure is surrounded by shadow cast by others standing between it and the light, and the edges, where a figure is shaded on one side only. The note reasons that a figure between the light and the scene shows the scene's darkness where it faces away from the light and the light's brightness where it faces away from the scene. Second, that the figures be distributed to suit the subject; third, that each figure be alert and intent on its particular action.
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Relief and the correct placing of shadows
Before anything, see whether the figures have the relief the site and its light demand, and that shadows are not the same at the edges of the scene as in the middle. A figure in the middle is surrounded by shadow cast by others between it and the light, while a figure at the edge, set between the light and the scene, is shaded on one side only.
Distribute the figures and keep them intent
Second, the sowing or distribution of the figures should be arranged to suit the subject you want the scene to convey. Third, the figures should be alert and intently engaged in their particular action.
